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You mention in this section that Jonas is a friendly and easy-going guy, but don't really explain how so. What is the root of this disposition, especially for someone who was so buried in the high pressure world of academia? How does he approach other people who might not appreciate his cheery attitude?
How does Jonas cope with Earth and the humans living there? You mention the culture shock, but don't exactly go into the implications of what sort of concessions or struggles made to deal with such a different type of living. Sky of Diamonds is likely to have very many characters from Earth or Earth-like cultures. Will this affect Jonas in any way?
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Personality
You mention in this section that Jonas is a friendly and easy-going guy, but don't really explain how so. What is the root of this disposition, especially for someone who was so buried in the high pressure world of academia? How does he approach other people who might not appreciate his cheery attitude?
How does Jonas cope with Earth and the humans living there? You mention the culture shock, but don't exactly go into the implications of what sort of concessions or struggles made to deal with such a different type of living. Sky of Diamonds is likely to have very many characters from Earth or Earth-like cultures. Will this affect Jonas in any way?