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You mention that Elena has a personality change of some sort after the death of her parents. Could you please elaborate on what changed in her, what stayed the same, and if any of that changed after she became a vampire?
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We just want to clarify on this one: when you say she will be human, will she also be completely powerless, or retaining some of her super-[thing] powers even while human?
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Personality
You mention that Elena has a personality change of some sort after the death of her parents. Could you please elaborate on what changed in her, what stayed the same, and if any of that changed after she became a vampire?
Powers
We just want to clarify on this one: when you say she will be human, will she also be completely powerless, or retaining some of her super-[thing] powers even while human?