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Sky of Diamonds Moderators ([personal profile] resetbutton) wrote 2012-04-28 02:31 am (UTC)

Revisions

Revisions...
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Your application is good! We just have a few questions about your app before we can decide to accept or decline. Please expand on...

Age

We understand that T'Pol is 67 as a Vulcan, but how does this translate into the human years that Delilah would have lived? (Unless, of course, you intend her to be 67 as a human, as well.)

Personality

We would like to know how T'Pol deals with other people. You mention that she does, but not the process or understanding of this process. Additionally, a major part of T'Pol's character is her racial identity as a vulcan amidst a society of humans. How will she be affected when she is made human upon entrance to Sky of Diamonds?

History

What is her actual canon point? You say near the beginning that she will come in immediately after being made First Officer, then in this section outright state her history point to be somewhere after the events of In A Mirror, Darkly.

Powers

As these two aspects of T'Pol's powers (super-body or touch telepathy) do not seem to fall under the idea of a single power or concept, we ask that you choose just the one or consider a way that they might be connected to keep them both.

Third-person sample

This would appear to be either from canon or indistinguishable from canon. Please submit another sample that more clearly shows a narrative involving mirrorverse T'Pol.

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